I picked up a copy of Saint Nicholas and the Mouse of Myra by Jay Stoeckl, OFS, because the idea of a graphic novel telling the story of St. Nicholas intrigued me. And I guess I’m still intrigued by the idea, but not so much by this particular book.

Unwelcome Disneyfication

St. Nicholas’s sidekick, Cicero the Mouse, gives the story sort of a Disney feel that I don’t really like. I mean, I rather like the character. He’s smart and sassy, and he is quick to help Bishop Nicholas in whatever way he can. But, when the young Nicholas’s father is dying, and prays for God to give him a companion to help him in all his good works, a philosopher mouse seems to trivialize both the prayer and the good works. It just doesn’t work for me.

The book is Disneyfied in another way, too. There’s a lot of roughness and earthiness in the stories of St. Nicholas that have been handed down to us. But the stories, as Stoeckl tells them, have lost their rough edges. Nicholas disputes with Arius, but he doesn’t punch him. The poor girls will become slaves, because they can’t marry. But there’s no mention of prostitution. When Nicholas is in prison, there are references to torture and ill treatment, but it looks clean, and the prisoners look healthy and well fed. When Bishop Nicholas stops the execution, he doesn’t wrestle the sword away from the executioner.

I think, perhaps, this being advertised as a graphic novel, I was expecting the content to be targeted towards an older audience. I didn’t expect the stories to be tidied up for young children.

A Bit Didactic

I also didn’t expect the book to be preachy and didactic. But it is, at least for my taste. Besides serving as Nicholas’s helper, Cicero’s ignorance of Christianity allows Stoeckl to insert explicit lessons into the story. Lessons complete with footnotes.

And footnoting Scripture references — no. Just don’t. Not in a children’s book. It is intrusive, and it gives the page the unwholesome appearance of a Chick tract. But young children aren’t likely ever to have seen a Chick tract, so that might not bother them as much as it bothers me.

A More Extensive Story

The most delightful thing about Saint Nicholas and the Mouse of Myra is that it includes episodes from St. Nicholas’s life that many readers will be unfamiliar with.

Of course it contains the familiar stories of the man with three unwed daughters, the dispute with Arius. But it also includes stories that are less familiar – saving a ship from a storm at sea, saving Myra from famine by multiplying grain, healing a dying child.

And it contains one story that I’ve never seen associated with Nicholas anywhere before – Nicholas hanging up his cloak on a sunbeam. I’ve seen a similar story associated with St. Brigid of Ireland, and perhaps the author misremembered it as a St. Nicholas story. That’s one of the ways that stories change over time – even stories about saints.

Would I Buy It?

I don’t think Saint Nicholas and the Mouse of Myra is destined to become a Christmas classic.

But I do think that there are children who would find it delightful. A child who is just learning to read independently will likely appreciate the comic-book layout, with speech bubbles and clear illustrations. And a child who loves St. Nicholas may well find the unfamiliar episodes in the saint’s life exciting. The flaws that bothered me in the book are unlikely, I think, to bother a seven-year-old.

I wouldn’t advise you to get this book for your own collection. But for the right child, it would make a lovely gift.

And I’ll keep my eye out for a graphic novel about St. Nicholas that’s intended for a more mature audience. Saint Nicholas and the Mouse of Myra isn’t that book. But that is a book I would really like to read.

Read More

Vasily and the Dragon: A Review: St. Nicholas plays a major role in this retelling of a Russian folk tale.

Stories from the Life of St. Nicholas: Learn how the stories we have about St. Nicholas developed over the centuries as they were told and retold by people who loved the saint, and follow links to my telling of these stories.

Some of my favorite Christmas picture books: There are so many wonderful picture books about St. Nicholas and the Nativity. These are a few of my favorites.

Charlotte Riggle, author of Catherine's Pascha and The Saint Nicholas Day Snow
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